Spice4Manga's Reviews

This review contains spoilers. The entire story is one guy sleeping (UNPROTECTED) with two women in alternating chapters. On top of that the scenes are all rinse and repeat in that the only thing that changes is the bathing location they are doing it at.

The author tried to have a bit of a plot by having one girl that the guy "liked more" yet he still slept with the other woman whenever she took her top off, which was a surprising number of times even for erotica. It's like new chapter? Top off! Execute "love scene W1". Now, execute "love scene W2". New chapter? Alternate.

Don't get me wrong, I'm all for stories with only 10% plot to them. But at least make the other 90% interesting, at least try more than two positions, or better yet don't censor the crap out of it so half the time you can't tell what they're doing.